What takes up most of your time? Do you think you manage your time wisely?
학생이 쓴 원문
As 2.5 level social distance started, I can\'t take pilates classes and spend more time at home.
After that, I am hooked on watching dramas on Netflix.
I am little worried that I spend too much time on watching videos and it feels like that watching many videos makes my brain dull.
So I am thinking of making a time limit on watching video and trying other hobbies that I can feel self-improvement.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]. I appreciate your sharing your thoughts on the topic. It is inspiring that you want to make use of your time wisely. Maybe you can share your new hobbies in class next time. I look forward to hearing about those. See you in class. Have a good one. ~Teacher Jane c\",)
As 2.5 level social distance started, I can\'t take pilates classes and spend more time at home.
>>> Since the level 2.5 social distance started, I can not take pilates classes and spend more time at home.
After that, I am hooked on watching dramas on Netflix.
>>> CORRECT =)
I am little worried that I spend too much time on watching videos and it feels like that watching many videos makes my brain dull.
>>> I am a little worried that spending too much time on watching videos would make my brain dull.
So I am thinking of making a time limit on watching video and trying other hobbies that I can feel self-improvement.
>>> So I am thinking of putting a time limit on watching videos and trying other hobbies that I can have self-improvement.
As 2.5 level social distance started, I can\'t take pilates classes and spend more time at home.
>>> Since the level 2.5 social distance started, I can not take pilates classes and spend more time at home.
After that, I am hooked on watching dramas on Netflix.
>>> CORRECT =)
I am little worried that I spend too much time on watching videos and it feels like that watching many videos makes my brain dull.
>>> I am a little worried that spending too much time on watching videos would make my brain dull.
So I am thinking of making a time limit on watching video and trying other hobbies that I can feel self-improvement.
>>> So I am thinking of putting a time limit on watching videos and trying other hobbies that I can have self-improvement.
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