What thing that can usually change your mind?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is rest. When I stressed out, If I take a rest, I feel better.
And when I make an important decision, It may be difficult.
So It is good to decide after rest.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Emily! You are right! Rest is really essential when making important decisions. Have a great day!-Faith-
It is rest. >> CORRECT
When I stressed out, If I take a rest, I feel better.
>> When I\'m stressed out and I take a rest, I feel better.
And when I make an important decision, It may be difficult.
And when I make an important decision, It may be difficult.
>> And when I make an important decision, it may be difficult.
So It is good to decide after rest.
So It is good to decide after rest.
>> So, it is good to decide after rest.
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