What things about summer do I like most and least?
학생이 쓴 원문
What I like the most about summer is that watermelons are cheap and delicious, and the thing I hate the most is that it\'s too hot to walk around. What I want to do in summer, which I can\'t do in other seasons, is to turn on the air conditioner and enjoy watermelon or ice cream in front of the air conditioner.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
What I like the most about summer is that watermelons are cheap and delicious, and the thing I hate the most is that it\'s too hot to walk around.
>>> What I like the most about summer is that watermelons are cheap and delicious, and what I hate the most about it is that it\'s too hot to walk outside.
What I want to do in summer, which I can\'t do in other seasons, is to turn on the air conditioner and enjoy watermelon or ice cream in front of the air conditioner.
>>> What I can do in summer that I can\'t do in other seasons, is to turn on the air conditioner and enjoy watermelon or ice cream in front of it.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.