What things are irreplaceable?
학생이 쓴 원문
Most of the material items in the world are replaceable. However, I think there are exceptions.
First, we can’t select and change a family when we are born. While we live, we have to keep relations with them.
Next, it’s our abilities. I’m not good at speaking English so I want to replace it but I can’t do that. I can be helped by a translating system, but I can’t keep using it all the time in my daily life when I’m in the middle of conversations. I have no choice but to study and learn English for it. I sometimes imagine that my brain becomes like a computer. If I can do that, I want to change some chips for my abilities. But you know, it’s not possible.
Lastly, I think the earth isn’t replaceable. Therefore, we have to save resources on the earth and not contaminate many things. Even though it already polluted a lot, we can’t live here any more hundreds of years later if the earth will be worse.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Miss [이름]!
Most of the material items in the world are replaceable.
>>> correct
However, I think there are exceptions.
>>> correct
First, we can’t select and change a family when we are born.
First, we can’t select and change a family when we are born.
>>> correct
While we live, we have to keep relations with them.
>>> correct
Next, it’s our abilities.
Next, it’s our abilities.
>>> correct
I’m not good at speaking English so I want to replace it but I can’t do that.
>>> correct
I can be helped by a translating system, but I can’t keep using it all the time in my daily life when I’m in the middle of conversations.
>>> correct
I have no choice but to study and learn English for it.
>>> correct
I sometimes imagine that my brain becomes like a computer.
>>> correct
If I can do that, I want to change some chips for my abilities.
>>> correct
But you know, it’s not possible.
>>> correct
Lastly, I think the earth isn’t replaceable.
Lastly, I think the earth isn’t replaceable.
>>> correct
Therefore, we have to save resources on the earth and not contaminate many things.
>>> correct
Even though it already polluted a lot, we can’t live here any more hundreds of years later if the earth will be worse.
>>> Even though it\' is already polluted a lot, we can’t live here anymore hundreds of years later if the earth will be worse.
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