What things can men or women do that the other cannot do and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
In time past, women\'s job and men\'s job\'s has a big wall.
But in modern time, each gender boundaries are broken.
For example, police officer and fire fighter are men\'s job and nurse is women\'s job.
In these day, men and women can choice that kind of job either.
Just follow the personal talent.
So i think that an job area isn\'t matched to this subject.
I want to talk about gender of character.
Only women can be pregnant.
And men is more powerful than women.
So men have to protect their wife.
Pregnant is really painful and difficult.
Women really need to someone\'s help and love.
And women have to love husband and take care of their own body condition.
강사 첨삭
Wow! Great job Simon! Your homework today is special. You wrote your opinions sincerely. Thank you for that.
For example, police officer and fire fighter are men\'s job and nurse is women\'s job.
>>For example, police officer and fire fighter are men\'s job and nurse is the women\'s job.
In these day, men and women can choice that kind of job either.
>>In these days, men and women can choose what kind of job they want.
Just follow the personal talent.
>>Just follow it\'s own personal talent.
So i think that an job area isn\'t matched to this subject.
>>So, I think talking about some job doesn\'t matched to this subject.
I want to talk about gender of character.
>>I want to talk about the character of each gender.
Only women can be pregnant.
>>CORRECT
So men have to protect their wife.
>>CORRECT
Pregnant is really painful and difficult.
>>Being pregnant is really painful and difficult.
Women really need to someone\'s help and love.
>>Women really need someone\'s help and love.
And women have to love husband and take care of their own body condition.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
In time past, women\'s job and men\'s job\'s has a big wall.
>>In the past, women\'s job and men\'s jobs have a big wall.
But in modern time, each gender boundaries are broken.
>>But in modern times, the boundaries of each gender are broken.
But in modern time, each gender boundaries are broken.
>>But in modern times, the boundaries of each gender are broken.
For example, police officer and fire fighter are men\'s job and nurse is women\'s job.
>>For example, police officer and fire fighter are men\'s job and nurse is the women\'s job.
In these day, men and women can choice that kind of job either.
>>In these days, men and women can choose what kind of job they want.
OR>>In these days, men and women have their own choice on any kind of job.
Just follow the personal talent.
>>Just follow it\'s own personal talent.
So i think that an job area isn\'t matched to this subject.
>>So, I think talking about some job doesn\'t matched to this subject.
I want to talk about gender of character.
>>I want to talk about the character of each gender.
Only women can be pregnant.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Only women has the capability to get pregnant.
And men is more powerful than women.
>>CORRECT
And men is more powerful than women.
>>CORRECT
OR>>And men is stronger than women.
So men have to protect their wife.
>>CORRECT
Pregnant is really painful and difficult.
>>Being pregnant is really painful and difficult.
Women really need to someone\'s help and love.
>>Women really need someone\'s help and love.
And women have to love husband and take care of their own body condition.
>>And women have to love their husband and take care of their own body to have a good condition.
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