What things do you love to do on weekends?
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Actually, I work in my home. If it wants counseling for someone clients, I have to work even through the weekend. So my weekend seems like a weekday than other people. But I also think there is a joy that the word \'weekend\' gives. I study with my friends in the library, I also catch up on sleep, sometimes, I draw a painting too. Also, Weekend is an opportunity to meet friends working for a company. We can\'t meet often, so we used to introduce restaurants that like each other, and walking on the street a longer time.
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Good day, Da [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Actually, I work in my home.
>> CORRECT!OR >> I actually work from home.
If it wants counseling for someone clients, I have to work even through the weekend.
>> If some clients want to have some counseling, I have to work even through the weekend.
So my weekend seems like a weekday than other people.
>> CORRECT!But I also think there is a joy that the word \'weekend\' gives.
>> CORRECT!I study with my friends in the library, I also catch up on sleep, sometimes, I draw a painting too.
>> CORRECT!Also, Weekend is an opportunity to meet friends working for a company.
>> Also, weekend is an opportunity to meet friends working for a company.
We can\'t meet often, so we used to introduce restaurants that like each other, and walking on the street a longer time.
>> We can\'t meet often, so we used to find restaurants to meet each other, and walk on the street for a longer time.
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