What things do you love to do on your free time?
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Even on my free time, I have many things that I want to do. However, my free time is limited that I can\'t do all things that I want to do. For instance, I want to do a board game with my brothers most because I am into a board game. And I also love to play some smartphone games. But, I think smartphone game is the worst way to waste time that I try to keep away from it.
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Good day, Ye [이름]!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. CamilleEven on my free time, I have many things that I want to do.
>> CORRECT! However, my free time is limited that I can\'t do all things that I want to do.
>> CORRECT! For instance, I want to do a board game with my brothers most because I am into a board game.
>> CORRECT! And I also love to play some smartphone games.
>> CORRECT! But, I think smartphone game is the worst way to waste time that I try to keep away from it.
>> CORRECT!
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