What things do you need to consider when setting a goal
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I think I need to consider about time, surplus funds and my ability. And the most important things are spirit of challenge and the ability to execute.
whoever can think setting a goal but whoever can\'t execute. And whoever can\'t succeed.
until succees I think I need to wait and be patient.
Someone told me \"You succeeded. \" But I can\'t agree.
Because I haven\'t reached the success I think I have yet.
So I will continue to challenge myself and even if I fail, I will try again. and then I think I would be successful.
Thank you.^^
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Thank you for this Miss. [Name]!
I think I need to consider about time, surplus funds and my ability.
>>> correct
And the most important things are spirit of challenge and the ability to execute. whoever can think setting a goal but whoever can\'t execute.
>>> And the most important things are the spirit to take on challenges and the ability to execute, whoever can think of setting a goal but can\'t execute, and whoever can\'t succeed.
until succees I think I need to wait and be patient.
>>> Until I succeed, I think I need to wait and be patient.
Someone told me \"You succeeded. \" But I can\'t agree. Because I haven\'t reached the success I think I have yet.
>>> Someone told me \"You succeeded. \", but I can\'t agree because I haven\'t reached the success I think I have yet.
So I will continue to challenge myself and even if I fail, I will try again and then I think I would be successful.
>>> correct
>>> OR: So I will continue to challenge myself and even if I fail, I will try again. Only then I think I would be successful.
Thank you.^^
>>> correct
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