What things do you want to accomplish this year?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I want to have a hamster.
2. I want to sleep in my mom\'s bed with my mom.
3. I want to have good relationship with my friend.
4. I want to get good score in my test.
5. I want try eating 엽기 떡볶이.
There are also other many things I want to accomplish.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you for doing your homework!
I hope you win a lot of games and enjoy your weekend!
See you next week~
>>CORRECT
2. I want to sleep in my mom\'s bed with my mom.
>>I want to sleep with my mom on her bed.
3. I want to have good relationship with my friend.
>>I want to have a good relationship with my friend.
4. I want to get good score in my test.
>>I want to get a good score on my test.
5. I want try eating 엽기 떡볶이.
>>I want to try eating some bizarre Tteokbokki.
There are also other many things I want to accomplish.
>>There are also a lot of things I want to accomplish.
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