What things do you want to add or remove in your house? Explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to add dressing room in my house. Because it is my dream to have dressing room. And I want to add a bath. Because we don’t have a both, because we removed an old bath.
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Hi [이름]! :)
Wow! That sounds awesome. I want that too.
I want to add dressing room in my house.
>> I want to add a dressing room in my house.
Because it is my dream to have dressing room.
>> It is my dream to have one.
And I want to add a bath.
>> I also want to have a bathtub.
Because we don’t have a both, because we removed an old bath.
>> This is because we don\'t have both since we removed our old bathroom.
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