What things do you want to add or remove in your house? Explain your answer.
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What things do you want to add or remove in your house?
If I have junk stuffs, throw them away in my room.
In my expereince, if I don\'t use them now, I won\'t use it later.
When it is waste to throw good products away, I make a contribution to charity.
I don\'t want to add something in my house, because I like to live the minimalist life.
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If I have junk stuffs, throw them away in my room.
>> I have a lot of junk in my room that I need to throw away.
In my expereince, if I don\'t use them now, I won\'t use it later.
>> I always think that if I don\'t use them now, I won\'t use it later.
When it is waste to throw good products away, I make a contribution to charity.
>> When it is a waste to throw good products away, I will give it to charity.
I don\'t want to add something in my house, because I like to live the minimalist life.
>> I don\'t want to add something in my house because I like to live a minimalist life.
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