What things in your home couldn't you live without? Which part of your house do you spend the least

2015-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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A tooth brush, water, and the bidet-toilet are essential stuff that I desperately need at home. The restroom is the space where I cannot live without as wll. I cannot go to bed or even take a rest without brushing my teeth, taking a shower, and do the basic things. The restroom is the place where I can finish my day from all the hard work and the daily grind.. TV is another important item that I reply on. I can hang around at home watching TV. I spend the least time in my daughter’s room because it is her private space where she can enjoy her freedom to be alone. As I prefer to have my own space at home, so does she and I have to respect it. There is an evacuation space besides a small room where our family spends time mostly on doing computer jobs. The evacuation room is designated as per the law and we typically use it as a storage room to store various sundries. I do not want to go inside the storage room because it is packed with all the hodgepodge.

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Hello Sir [이름].

T.G.I.F!! Yahoo!

It\'s our favorite day. ^^

Thank you so much for sharing something about your house.

I think it is really huge.

We have the same things that we couldn\'t live without. Hihihi.

I can\'t imagine not taking a shower in a day. hihihi.

Have you seen the TV series titled, \"Walking Dead\"?

Let us talk about it in class.
Teacher Nina


A tooth brush, water, and the bidet-toilet are essential stuff that I desperately need at home.

>> Toothbrush, water and the bidet-toilet are the essential stuffs that I desperately need at home.

The restroom is the space where I cannot live without as wll.

>> correct ( spelling check: well ^)

>> The restroom is the space where I can\'t live without as well.

I cannot go to bed or even take a rest without brushing my teeth, taking a shower, and do the basic things.

>> I cannot go to bed or even take a rest without brushing my teeth, taking a shower and doing the basic things.

The restroom is the place where I can finish my day from all the hard work and the daily grind..

>> correct

>> The restroom is the place where I can finish my day from all of the hard work and daily grind.

TV is another important item that I reply on.

>> Did you mean: TV is another important item that I can rely on.

I can hang around at home watching TV.

>> correct

>> I can stay at home and watch TV.

I spend the least time in my daughter’s room because it is her private space where she can enjoy her freedom to be alone.

>> I spend the least time in my daughter\'s room because it is her private space where she can enjoy her freedom to be alone.

>> I spend the least time in my daughter\'s room because it is her private space where she can enjoy her time alone.

As I prefer to have my own space at home, so does she and I have to respect it.

>> correct

>> As I prefer to have my own space at home, so both of us should respect it.

There is an evacuation space besides a small room where our family spends time mostly on doing computer jobs.

>> Did you mean: There is an evacuation space besides the small room where our family mostly spend time on doing computer jobs.

The evacuation room is designated as per the law and we typically use it as a storage room to store various sundries.

>> correct

I do not want to go inside the storage room because it is packed with all the hodgepodge.

>> correct

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