What things make a great movie a great movie?
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The great movie has many special things. For example, sounds, camera, actors, lights, dialogue..
All about the image comes from the screen and it have a specific indention.
If you have a lot of questions after watching movies and you want to watch again, that movie might be great movie.
Because the movie that captivated your heart has many questions and you want to know all about the stories.
Some great movies has a big echo, or dynamic camera moving, or crazy acting, or fills the need of having stories.
Most important thing is the real subject to speak to an audience.
And if we figure out the subject immidiately, it could be a great movies.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
Thank you for this answer. I got your idea about a great movie. However, there are still grammar patterns you need to get used to and practice so readers and listeners would easily understand what you want to express. Always read your corrections. ^^
~T. Maine
>>Great movies have many special and good things.
For example, sounds, camera, actors, lights, dialogue..
>> For example, they would be the sounds, cameras, lights, actors, and dialogue.
All about the image comes from the screen and it have a specific indention.
All about the image comes from the screen and it have a specific indention.
>> All images come from the screen and have a specific indention.
If you have a lot of questions after watching movies and you want to watch again, that movie might be great movie.
If you have a lot of questions after watching movies and you want to watch again, that movie might be great movie.
>> If you have a lot of questions after watching movies and you want to watch them again, those movies might be a great ones.
Because the movie that captivated your heart has many questions and you want to know all about the stories.
Because the movie that captivated your heart has many questions and you want to know all about the stories.
>> It is because the movie captivated your heart has given you many questions and you want to know all about its stories.
Some great movies has a big echo, or dynamic camera moving, or crazy acting, or fills the need of having stories.
Some great movies has a big echo, or dynamic camera moving, or crazy acting, or fills the need of having stories.
>> Some great movies have a big echo or dynamic camera movement, crazy acting, or fill the need of having stories.
Most important thing is the real subject to speak to an audience.
Most important thing is the real subject to speak to an audience.
>> The most important thing is the real subject to speak to an audience.
And if we figure out the subject immidiately, it could be a great movies.
And if we figure out the subject immidiately, it could be a great movies.
>> And if we figure out the subject immediately, it could be a great movie.
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