What things that you love doing aside nap
학생이 쓴 원문
Aside nap,my favorite things is watching YouTube, playing with my sister and draw characters. First, I love watching YouTube
because in YouTube there are many fun things.
Second, I love to play with my sister because
She\'s so funny and she always make me laugh.
Lastly, I love to draw characters because when
I am bored, l draw some of characters or a character I made so, these days l\'m not bored.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing my dear!! I would love to get to know more of the things you like. See you in class!!!
Aside nap,my favorite things is watching YouTube, playing with my sister and draw characters.
>> Aside from taking a nap, my favorite things are watching YouTube, playing with my sister, and drawing some characters.
First, I love watching YouTube because in YouTube there are many fun things.
>> First, I love watching YouTube because, on YouTube, there are many fun things that I can watch.
Second, I love to play with my sister because
She\'s so funny and she always make me laugh.
>> Second, I love to play with my sister because she\'s so funny and she always makes me laugh.
Lastly, I love to draw characters because when
I am bored, l draw some of characters or a character I made so, these days l\'m not bored.
>> Lastly, I love to draw characters because when I am bored, l draw some of the characters or a character I made so, these days I\'m not bored.
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