What things were you taught by your older family members?

2019-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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When I was young, my maternal grandmother taught me a lot of things. She told me about the small things like old song, old story about her life and Korea and so on. She is also a frugal woman because her generation have grown up with the experience of a world war II. I could learned some saving skills from her and value of everything. She was a nice cooker but now she can not cook since she is too old now. But from her, my mother and I could learn the special recipes. My grandmother can go well with other people as well. Her thoughtfulness and understanding influenced me very much.

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^



When I was young, my maternal grandmother taught me a lot of things.

>>> correct


 She told me about the small things like old song, old story about her life and Korea and so on.

>>> correct


 She is also a frugal woman because her generation have grown up with the experience of a world war II.

>>> She is also a frugal woman because her generation have grown up with the experience of world war II.


 I could learned some saving skills from her and value of everything.

>>> correct


 She was a nice cooker but now she can not cook since she is too old now.

>>> She was a good cook but now she can\'t cook any longer because she is too old now.


 But from her, my mother and I could learn the special recipes.

>>> But we learned special recipes from her.


 My grandmother can go well with other people as well.

>>> correct


 Her thoughtfulness and understanding influenced me very much.

>>> correct

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