What things were you taught by your older family members? How have they been useful in your life?

2019-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

My parents often said about family motto which is consisted of Chinese characters. It is called \'Ga Hwa Man Sa Sung\' and this means that if family is harmonious, everything would work out well. (I wanted to say about this when we talk about family.) I actually couldn\'t understand what my father said. How can everything work out just because family is happy? However, when I entered the hospital as a nurse, I realize whole things in the family motto that my parents taught me. I learned lots of nursing skills but I also had very hard time in the hospital and I can\'t expose the sad feeling from work place to others without family. I thanked to them but they usually were angry. Family always hung up my phone call and just heard my stories with cheering. Through this experience which is not good one, I can understand family motto and also realize that family is the only my side in every time.

강사 첨삭

Good morning [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework. I appreciate you for sharing your story.

I experienced the same. But I do believe that our parents will always be there to support and guide us

no matter how sad our memories were with them in the past. I hope this will serve as a lesson

that you would always treasure. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

My parents often said about family motto which is consisted of Chinese characters.

>> My parents often said this Chinese motto which is about family.

It is called \'Ga Hwa Man Sa Sung\' and this means that if family is harmonious, everything would work out well.

>> It is called \'Ga Hwa Man Sa Sung\' which means that if a family is harmonious, everything will work out well.

(I wanted to say about this when we talk about family.)

>> (I wanted to say about this when we talked about family.)

I actually couldn\'t understand what my father said.

>> CORRECT

How can everything work out just because family is happy?

>> Does it mean that just because a family is happy, everything can work out?

However, when I entered the hospital as a nurse, I realize whole things in the family motto that my parents taught me.

>> However, when I started to work as a nurse in the hospital, I realized these things that my parents taught me.

I learned lots of nursing skills but I also had very hard time in the hospital and I can\'t expose the sad feeling from work place to others without family. 

>> I learned lots of nursing skills but I also had a very hard time in the hospital and I couldn\'t show my sadness from work. 

I thanked to them but they usually were angry.

>> I thanked them but they were usually angry.

Family always hung up my phone call and just heard my stories with cheering.

>> My family always hung up my phone call and just shouted at me when they heard my stories.

Through this experience which is not good one, I can understand family motto and also realize that family is the only my side in every time.

>> Though this is not a good experience, I can understand the family motto and I also realized that my family are the only people who will always be on my side.

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