What things would you never let technology replace?
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The emotional works would never replace to technology.
Like a phychological counselor, upbringing about mind.
Nowadays, many job replace to technongy even if artist.
AI can make the arts, advertising, writes, music. And it is difficult to divide who is real person. It is little bit scary. It is because sometimes they seems real person. But actually they have huge date all about things so they just input all impormations.
They don\'t have mind. So they couldn\'t take care babies and couldn\'t conselt people for sincere mind.
It is good to develop technology but it\'s more important keep human identity.
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The emotional works would never replace to technology.
>> Emotional work would never replace technology.
Like a phychological counselor, upbringing about mind.
Like a phychological counselor, upbringing about mind.
>> An example would be psychological counselors who checks the minds of people.
Nowadays, many job replace to technongy even if artist.
Nowadays, many job replace to technongy even if artist.
>>Nowadays, there are many jobs that can be replaced by technology even acting.
AI can make the arts, advertising, writes, music.
AI can make the arts, advertising, writes, music.
>> AI can make art, advertising, write something and play some music.
And it is difficult to divide who is real person.
>> And it is difficult to know who is a real person or not.
It is little bit scary.
>>It is a bit scary.
It is because sometimes they seems real person.
>> It is because sometimes they seem to be a reap person.
But actually they have huge date all about things so they just input all impormations.
>> But actually, they have a huge data about all things so they just input all the information.
They don\'t have mind.
They don\'t have mind.
>> They don\'t have feelings like humans.
So they couldn\'t take care babies and couldn\'t conselt people for sincere mind.
>> So they couldn\'t take care of babies and couldn\'t counsel people sincerly.
It is good to develop technology but it\'s more important keep human identity.
It is good to develop technology but it\'s more important keep human identity.
>> It is good to develop technology, but it\'s more important to keep human identity.
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