What three habits will improve your life?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think time management, to start a day early and being a good listener are the key factors to improve my life. First, I am going to say about time management. Many writer have released books about the importance of time management. They stressed the importance of usage of spare time between any activities. For example, time on our way to work is one of the spare time that we can use effectively.
For smokers, they can save their time a lot, if they quit smoking. Secondly, early bird have more time than night owl. So, early bird can study whatever they want to learn or do exercise for keeping their health. Lastly, I think that being a good listener is the most important habit among the lists that I provided above. It is really difficult habit we can have. It is human nature to speak our opinion but we have been learnt that we can make friends and make them our side, if we give attention what somebody is saying.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for submitting your answer to me.
I truly appreciate it. ^^
Let\'s keep our good habits and live a better life. ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
First, I am going to say about time management.
>> CORRECT.
Many writer have released books about the importance of time management.
>> Many writers have released books about the importance of time management.
They stressed the importance of usage of spare time between any activities.
>> CORRECT.
For example, time on our way to work is one of the spare time that we can use effectively.
>> CORRECT.
For smokers, they can save their time a lot, if they quit smoking.
>> CORRECT.
Secondly, early bird have more time than night owl.
>> Secondly, early birds have more time than night owls.
So, early bird can study whatever they want to learn or do exercise for keeping their health.
>> So, an early bird can study whatever they want to learn or do exercise for keeping their health.
Lastly, I think that being a good listener is the most important habit among the lists that I provided above.
>> CORRECT.
It is really difficult habit we can have.
>> It is a really difficult habit we can have.
It is human nature to speak our opinion but we have been learnt that we can make friends and make them our side, if we give attention what somebody is saying.
>> It is human nature to speak out our opinion but we have been learnt that we can make friends and make them on our side, if we give attention on what somebody is saying.
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