What three languages would you like to speak, and why?
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Except for Korean, I want to speak well about English, French, and German. Well, without English because English is the common language around the world. I have a fantasy about German and France. First German, you know, German\'s technology is the best in the world. Especially, Rolls-Royce Ltd has known for only luxury car corporation. But, they have a bu[이름]ess to make an engine of aircraft. That\'s why I want to speak well, I want to learn there. And France, there is no special reason I want to make a lot of friends who\'ve got blonde hair due to too many there. :)
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Except for Korean, I want to speak well about English, French, and German.
>> Except for Korean, I want to speak English, French, and German well.
Well, without English because English is the common language around the world.
>> CORRECT!I have a fantasy about German and France.
>> I have a fantasy about German and French.
First German, you know, German\'s technology is the best in the world.
>> CORRECT!Especially, Rolls-Royce Ltd has known for only luxury car corporation.
>> Especially, Rolls-Royce Ltd has been known for only luxury car corporations.
But, they have a bu[이름]ess to make an engine of aircraft.
>> CORRECT!That\'s why I want to speak well, I want to learn there.
>> That\'s why I want to speak well, I want to study there.
And France, there is no special reason I want to make a lot of friends who\'ve got blonde hair due to too many there. :)
>> And France, there is no special reason; I want to make a lot of friends who\'ve got blonde hair because they are quite many. :)
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