-What three possessions do you have that you would never give away?- (^-^)
학생이 쓴 원문
At first, I\'d never give up my own time. At least, I need more than a hour for spending my own time. Because, it is the most important way for recharging my energy. If I spend time without this, I\'d have quite hard time. My own time is one of core times for my life.
I really like reading novels and watching movies. So, when I have some times, I prefer stay home and doing my favourite. Of course, I like to see my friends either. But, meeting some people is after my own time.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay! Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this one. I appreciate it! ^^
I definitely agree with you. Everyone needs their alone time. I believe that doing so has a lot of benefits. One of which is that it helps build mental strength which I guess we all need. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
At first, I\'d never give up my own time.
>>First, I\'d never give up my own time.
At least, I need more than a hour for spending my own time.
>>At least, I need more than an hour to spend time alone.
Because, it is the most important way for recharging my energy.
>>CORRECT
If I spend time without this, I\'d have quite hard time.
>>If I spend time without this, I\'d have quite a hard time.
My own time is one of core times for my life.
>>Having a time on my own is the very core of my life.
I really like reading novels and watching movies.
I really like reading novels and watching movies.
>>CORRECT
So, when I have some times, I prefer stay home and doing my favourite.
>>So, when I have some time, I prefer to stay home doing the stuff I like.
Of course, I like to see my friends either.
>>Of course, I would like to see my friends too.
But, meeting some people is after my own time.
>>But, meeting with people would be after my \"alone\" time.
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