What tips can you give to those children who are still very shy and timid? Give at least three and e
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s not good to be shy because there are lots of things that you have to be brave and be confident.
You can fix it by doing this.
First, You can practice it with somebody that you\'re not shy. Like your parents. But if you feel shy with everyone just practice it by yourself.
That way you will know what to say and what to do.
Second, You can watch cartoons or read books about meeting new people. You can know good examples of expressions.
And for last, You have to be confident of yourself. That\'s the point. You have to be proud of yourself and keep trying new things.
These tips will make you a better person. :-)
-The End-
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What tips can you give to those children who are still very shy and timid? Give at least three and explain.
It\'s not good to be shy because there are lots of things that you have to be brave and be confident.
>>> It\'s not good to be shy because there are lots of things that you have to be brave and be confident about yourself.
You can fix it by doing this.
First, You can practice it with somebody that you\'re not shy.
>>> You can fix it by doing this. First, you can practice it with somebody that you don\'t feel shy.
Like your parents. But if you feel shy with everyone just practice it by yourself.
>>> CORRECT
That way you will know what to say and what to do.
>>> CORRECT
Second, You can watch cartoons or read books about meeting new people.
>>> CORRECT
You can know good examples of expressions.
And for last, You have to be confident of yourself. That\'s the point.
And for last, You have to be confident of yourself. That\'s the point.
>>> You can know and learn good examples of expressions that you can use. And lastly, you have to be confident of yourself that you can do it. That\'s the point.
You have to be proud of yourself and keep trying new things.
These tips will make you a better person. :-)
These tips will make you a better person. :-)
>>> CORRECT
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