what to expect in college life
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to learn more broadly and deeply about the field I have set as my career path. I am also interested in building new relationships and obtaining information that I did not know by talking to others.
강사 첨삭
I want to learn more broadly and deeply about the field I have set as my career path.
>> I want to gain broader and deeper knowledge in the field I’ve chosen as my career path.
I am also interested in building new relationships and obtaining information that I did not know by talking to others.
>> I’m also interested in building new relationships and learning new information by talking to others.
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