What tourist attractions do you have in your country?

This sounds so picturesque, [이름]!

I can\'t imagine how dramatically Seoul shines at night. This is indeed a great escapade for tourists. Well done with your composition. Keep them coming!

~Teacher Eunice

We have a lot of tourists attractions all over Korea.
 >>> We have a lot of tourist attractions all over Korea.

The numbers of tourists are increasing every year.
 >>> Correct!

In Seoul, I have seen a plenty of tourists from all over the world on the streets and shops.
 >>> In Seoul, I have seen plenty of tourists from all over the world on the streets and shops.

I have seen many of them in Myeondong in Seoul.
 >>> I have seen many of them in Myeondong, Seoul.

Stores with all different languages such as English, Chinese, Japanese, and etc, are attracting tourists who want to comfortably shop having assistance.
 >>> Stores with all different languages such as English, Chinese, Japanese, and etc, are attracting tourists who want to comfortably shop while having assistance. 

Also, there are various street foods along the streets with colorful signs and food smells that we can\'t resist passing by.
 >>> Also, there are various street foods along the streets with colorful signs and the smell of the food that we can\'t resist passing by. 

In addition to Myeongdong, Namsan tower is also loved by tourists in Seoul.
 >>> In addition to Myeongdong, Namsan tower is also being loved by tourists in Seoul.  

It\'s located in the middle of Seoul, the tower is top of the Namsan mountain.
 >>> It\'s located in the middle of Seoul and the tower is on the top of the Namsan mountain.

 >>> OR: The Namsan Tower is located on the top of the Namsan mountain.

They can ride cable cars or hike by trails to the top of it.
 >>> Correct!

When they get to the tower, they can look down the beautiful city views through windows in circles.
 >>> When they get to the tower, they can look down to the beautiful city views through the windows in circles.

Especially at night, it\'s amazing the lights of buildings and bridges on Han river like stars shine at night sky.

 >>> Especially at night, the amazing lights of the buildings and bridges on Han river look like stars that is shining in the night sky.