What tradition or custom from your country would you like to share or inform foreigners? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
These days, various cultures are mixed. So I am not sure what is my own tradition or custom, but I hope to share the thing that I like most. It is Hanbok, the traditional clothes. We don\'t wear it commonly, but it is a symbol of my country. Especially I love the fusion style than the old style. Please check the attached photos. It has own line and attraction. I think it is like an angel and mysterious clothes. Those are practical and pretty. It has a endless possibility to upgrade the design. However, it is so expensive, that\'s why I don\'t have any thing. But I will try to wear it!!
강사 첨삭
Hi Arissa,
Thank you for sharing your answer. I find hanbok really pretty but I was surprised to know that there are fusion styles. Thank you for sharing the lovely pictures. They look so nice! I think a lot of people, especially the youth, will find it more interesting to wear. Oh! I hope I\'ll get a chance to wear one too. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
>> These days, various cultures are mixed. So I am not sure what is my own tradition or custom, but I hope to share the thing that I like most. It is Hanbok, the traditional clothes. We don\'t wear it commonly, but it is a symbol of my country. I especially love the fusion style more than the old style. Please check the attached photos. It has its own line and attraction. I think it is like an angel and mysterious clothe. Those are practical and pretty. It has an endless possibility to upgrade the design. However, it is so expensive, that\'s why I don\'t have anything. But I will try to wear it!!
>> Or: These days, various cultures are mixed. So I am not sure what is my tradition or custom, but I hope to share the thing that I like most. It is Hanbok, one of our traditional clothes. We don\'t usually wear it, but it symbolizes my country. I especially love the fusion style more than the old style. Please check the attached photos. It has its line and attraction. I think it is like an angel and mysterious clothing. It is practical and pretty. There\'s an endless possibility to upgrade the design. However, it is so expensive, that\'s why I don\'t have anything. But I will try to wear it!!
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