What traditional values are not important or not necessary now?

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Good job!I really like how you have become more relaxed and comfortable when you speak in English,

For your grammar, just keep on talking even if you are not sure if your grammar is correct, eventually you will get the feel of spotting the mistakes you are making in your own sentences.

Remember to just keep on talking and don’t mind the mistakes because it’s my job to spot them and tell you the corrections

Teacher Nina

In Korean society, it is highly regarded to keep dignity.

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Saving one’s face is as important as your life.

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The perception has been formed under the influence of Confucianism.

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Confucian teaches that you shouldn’t run even when you are in danger of fire or even you are chased by someone.

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You should keep maintaining your solemn face.

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You shouldn’t laugh.

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Even if you cannot afford, you should loan money to buy a luxury car if your neighbor drives a BMW.

>> Even if you can\'t afford, you should loan money to buy a luxury car if your neighbor drives a BMW.

If your friend goes on a vacation to Maldives, you should go to Phuket at least not to fall behind regardless of how much you earn.

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A woman goes to a department store and pay her two to three month salary to buy a designer bag because she doesn’t want to look down by others.

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>> OR: A woman goes to a department store and buys a designer bag with her salary because she doesn\'t want to be looked down on by others.

Some people may criticize her of being extravagant and full of vanity, however, we cannot simply blame an individual because it a social problem we all have to pay attention to and try to change.

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>> Some people may criticize her of being extravagant and full of vanity. However, we cannot simply blame an individual because it a social problem we all have to pay attention to and try to change.

Our society has changed a lot, but there is still a long way to go.

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