What traditional values are not important or not necessary now?

Hello and good evening. Sir [이름]!

Thanks for a magnificent composition once again.

I learned a lot of things. ^^

I enjoyed reading your essay.

You are right! The society is becoming more competitive.

Like what you said, the people who are humble are often treated as not being competent.

We should always give our best shot.

Thanks for your time.

Teacher Nina

Back in the day, a divorce was regarded as a taboo and almost prohibited regardless of reasons.

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It didn’t matter under what situation you were.

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Once you got divorced, it became a scarlet letter, especially to women.

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A woman should have endured her husband’s affair, violence, indifference, and even harassment as well.

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The norm applied to men differently and the society was so generous to men.

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These days, getting divorced is not something that should be blamed or criticized.

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Compared to the past, an individual’s choice is widely respected. 

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However, women still receive much colder eyes and actually suffer a lot more than men.

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The other traditional value that has been tarnished today is humility.

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As the society is getting more competitive, a person who stays quiet doesn’t get an attention.

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The people who are humble are often treated as not being competent.

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We are somewhat forced by the society to show off or even exaggerate to some extent.

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Your real being is less important, which is sad.

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