What traditional ways of welcoming the New Year do you have in your family or in your region?

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In my country(korea), Most of the people are visit to famous place located near the ocean.

>> In my country, most people visit famous places that are located near the ocean.
Because they want to view sun-rise first of the day in New year. and They are make a wish.

>> This is becaus they want to view the sunrise on the first day of the year.

and They are make a wish. for example, Family health, win the lottery.

>> They make a wish, for example, for their family\'s health or for them to win the lottery.
after that, people eat korea tranditional food.

>> After that, people eat a Korean traditional food.
This food is consist of tteok.

>> This food consists of tteok.
eat the food is mean get the 1 years old.

>> Eating this food means you get a year older.