What traditional ways of welcoming the New Year do you have in your family or in your region?
학생이 쓴 원문
In 1st January 2020, we talk \"happy new year\" each other or send message to family or friends. Most Korean eat rice cake soup so called ttokguk. If we eat it, we get one year older. We share this with family on new years day.
강사 첨삭
In 1st January 2020, we talk \"happy new year\" each other or send message to family or friends.
>> On January 1st 2020, we greet each other \"happy new year\" or send messages to family or friends.
Most Korean eat rice cake soup so called ttokguk.
>> Most Koreans eat rice cake soup called ttokguk.
If we eat it, we get one year older. We share this with family on new years day.
>> If we eat it, we get one year older. We share this with our family on new years day.
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