What traditions or activities do you associate with Christmas?
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I don\'t know another country\'s traditions on Christmas. in Korea, tradition of Christmas is to give gift to children.
Many Korean children believe that the santa claus give a gift to them on Christmas.
However, there is a condition. children should be nice to others for whole year.
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I don\'t know another country\'s traditions on Christmas. in Korea, tradition of Christmas is to give gift to children.
>> I don’t know about other countries\' Christmas traditions. In Korea, the tradition of Christmas is to give gifts to children.
Many Korean children believe that the santa claus give a gift to them on Christmas.
>> Many Korean children believe that Santa Claus gives them a gift on Christmas.
However, there is a condition. children should be nice to others for whole year.
>> However, there is a condition—they must be nice to others for the whole year.
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