What transportation should be removed in your country?
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If I have to pick one up, I \'ll choose \'magnetic floating train\', which floats a little up from the rail to reduce noise, energy and speed lose by using strong magnetic effect. We don\'t use it and it is just displayed in a museum. Maybe it is hard to use it in everyday life because of the cost to install it. The technology is fascinating but the transportation is not much useful yet. So I think the \'magnetic floating train\' is okay to be removed but of course not the technology to make it because we may someday need that.
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Hello [이름] [이름]!
I guess that\'s the reason why it is now displayed in the Museum. It is really important to have a thorough study before implementing something. I heard that your country plans to release a \"taxi drone\". What do you think of that?
See you in class!
T. Aki~
If I have to pick one up, I \'ll choose \'magnetic floating train\', which floats a little up from the rail to reduce noise, energy and speed lose by using strong magnetic effect.
>>> If I have to pick one up, I\'ll choose the \'magnetic floating train\', which floats a little up from the rail to reduce noise, energy and speed lose by using a strong magnetic effect.
We don\'t use it and it is just displayed in a museum.
>>> CORRECT!
Maybe it is hard to use it in everyday life because of the cost to install it.
>>> CORRECT!
The technology is fascinating but the transportation is not much useful yet.
>>> The technology is fascinating but transportation is not very useful yet.
So I think the \'magnetic floating train\' is okay to be removed but of course not the technology to make it because we may someday need that.
>>> CORRECT!
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