What type of content would you suggest we produce to keep existing followers engaged?
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I can think of a lot of things.
Looking at the trend these days, I think I will try to make a challenge video that can be easily followed because challenges that imitate easy movements are popular.
But in my personal opinion, I think I\'ll suggest the things I good at doing.
For example, baking and share recipes and tips or recommend a place where people can enjoy a quiet atmosphere or a place where people can eat delicious food.
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I can think of a lot of things.
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>> I can think of many things.
Looking at the trend these days, I think I will try to make a challenge video that can be easily followed because challenges that imitate easy movements are popular.
Looking at the trend these days, I think I will try to make a challenge video that can be easily followed because challenges that imitate easy movements are popular.
>>Correct
But in my personal opinion, I think I\'ll suggest the things I good at doing.
But in my personal opinion, I think I\'ll suggest the things I good at doing.
>> But in my personal opinion, I think I\'ll suggest the things I am good at doing.
For example, baking and share recipes and tips or recommend a place where people can enjoy a quiet atmosphere or a place where people can eat delicious food.
For example, baking and share recipes and tips or recommend a place where people can enjoy a quiet atmosphere or a place where people can eat delicious food.
>>For example, baking and sharing recipes and tips or recommending a place where people can enjoy a quiet atmosphere or a place where people can eat delicious food.
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