What type of dance do you want to learn?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to learn hip-hop dance. I have already learned a beautiful dance like ballet, so I want to learn a powerful dance. I want to be good at hip-hop dancing.
강사 첨삭
Hi Clara! Thank you for your effort in answering your homework. Here are my corrections for you. :) I want you to emphasize which country would you move into.
-Teacher Elise
have a great day! ^^
-Teacher Elise
I want to learn hip-hop dance.
>>CORRECT
I have already learned a beautiful dance like ballet, so I want to learn a powerful dance.
>> I have learned how to ballet so I want to learn to a different dance.
I want to be good at hip-hop dancing.
>>CORRECT
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