What type of leadership style do you think is most effective in fostering a productive and healthy w
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Hi Stella,
Thanks, as always, for taking the time to answer this essay. :)
I totally agree with you because leading with humanity means guiding others with kindness, empathy, and respect. I strongly believe that everyone must be respected regardless of their rank and position in the company.
Wow! I hope you had a great time with your university friends. I’m also happy to hear that you bought something for yourself. I’m sure your son and husband are happy too; everybody’s happy! I hope you had a wonderful day today. Wishing you a less stressful week! :)
- Teacher Elly~
I feel like that it depends on some situations or steps.
>> I feel like it depends on the situation or the steps involved.
OR >> I think it depends on the situation or the specific steps.
For example, in my company team\'s case, I think the leader have to be restrict, because we are dealing with many kind of parmartuerical procducts.
>> For example, in my company\'s team, I think the leader has to be strict because we are dealing with many kinds of pharmaceutical products.
It have to control under fixed temperature and deliver to certain customers.
>> It has to be kept under a fixed temperature and delivered to certain customers.
So we must practice all task and work following regular SOP.
>> So we must perform all tasks and work according to the regular SOP.
However, I prefer people with humanity.
>> However, I prefer leaders who act with humanity.
OR >> However, I prefer a leadership style that shows humanity.
Hello Elly.
>> Hello, Elly.
I was happy, today.
>> I was happy today.
OR >> Today, I was happy.
Tomorrow, I\'m going to go Seoul for meeting my friends of the university.
>> Tomorrow, I\'m going to Seoul to meet my university friends.
So, I went to the shopping mall with my son and brought some clothes, today.
>> So, I went to the shopping mall with my son and bought some clothes today.
Of course, I brough a pair of shoes and T-shirts for my son and husband, because they might be angry, if I didn\'t buy it for them.
>> Of course, I bought a pair of shoes and T-shirts for my son and husband because they might have been angry if I didn’t buy them.
OR >> Of course, I bought a pair of shoes and T-shirts for my son and husband because they might be angry if I didn’t buy them anything.
They was happy and thanks for my plans.
>>They were happy and thankful for my plans.
It\'s a friday.
>> It\'s a Friday.
OR >> It\'s Friday.
Have a nice weekend.
>> CORRECT
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