What type of long-distance transportation do you think is most enjoyable? Explain why you like it wi

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Pesonally, I like to broad a plane.

>> Personally, I like to board a plane.

There are two reasons to support my oppinions. 

>> There are two reasons to support my opinion. 
The first reaosn is that I can see such a beautiful view.

>> The first reason is that I can see such a beautiful view.

>> The first reason is that I can see such a beautiful view from up there.

In my experience, whenever I went to foreign countries, I really enjoy seeing cloud and sun through the airplan.

>> In my experience, whenever I go to foreign countries, I really enjoy seeing the clouds and the sun through the airplane.
The second reason is that there are lots of interesting things.

>> The second reason is that there are lots of interesting things that I can do.

This is because I can watch movies and listen to the musics by using television, and I can enjoy eating some food there.

>> I can watch movies on TV, listen to music  and enjoy some food there.
In conclusion, I prefer to get on a plane for these reaons.

>> In conclusion, I prefer to get on a plane for these reasons.