What type of political system does your country have?
학생이 쓴 원문
Korea is a democratic country.
We have a president and don\'t have a king.
We vote the president every 5 years.
People elect member of the national assembly every 4 years as well.
They represent us and make law for nation.
In Korea, there is also an independent judiciary.
So, in sum, we separate the power: legislative, juridical, administrative branches in principle.
강사 첨삭
Hi Su ^^
Korea is a democratic country.
>>> correct
We have a president and don\'t have a king.
>>> correct
We vote the president every 5 years.
>>> We vote for our president every 5 years.
People elect member of the national assembly every 4 years as well.
>>> People elect members of the National assembly every 4 years as well.
They represent us and make law for nation.
>>> They represent us and make law for our nation.
In Korea, there is also an independent judiciary.
>>> correct
So, in sum, we separate the power: legislative, juridical, administrative branches in principle.
>>> correct
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