What type of work environment do you prefer?
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1. I Prefer to work in a gradually changing circumstance.
>>I prefer to work in a gradually changing environment/situation.
2. As you know, it was so bored when I worked for KEB HANA BANK.
>>As you know, it was so boring when I worked for KEB HANA Bank.
3. Bankers normally work with conservative stances for managing the money.
>>CORRECT!
4. If I want in unchanging atmosphere, I just take a rest or have a travel with my wife after retirement in July.
>>If I wanted an unchanging atmosphere, I would\'ve just taken a rest or travelled with my wife after my retirement in July.
5. I instantly applied to KOICA after my retirement,because I am a active person.
>>CORRECT!
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