What types of diets have you heard of?
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I’ve heard of intermittent fasting. It is good for diet. It is not eating for about 16 hours. But i think that the way person does not eat to diet is not good for health. With proper eating habit, exercising is the best way to diet.
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Hi, Erica! Great job sharing your thoughts! I agree that a balanced approach, with proper eating habits and exercise, is key to a healthy diet. Keep up the good work!
~T. Jenna
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>>I’ve heard that intermittent fasting is effective for dieting.
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>>I’ve heard that intermittent fasting can be effective for weight loss.
It is not eating for about 16 hours. But i think that the way person does not eat to diet is not good for health.
>>It involves not eating for about 16 hours, but I think that not eating as a way to diet is not good for health.
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>>It typically involves fasting for about 16 hours, but I believe relying on such a method alone may not be ideal for overall health.
With proper eating habit, exercising is the best way to diet.
>> With proper eating habits, exercising is the best way to diet.
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>>Maintaining balanced eating habits along with regular exercise is the most sustainable and healthy approach to dieting.
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