What types of leisure activities are popular in your country?

2024-05-17 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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Many people go camping for the leisure . There are so many camping shops and camping places in Korea. Also, there are many TV shows about camping. My younger brother also has gone camping regulraly. But I can\'t not understand how camping could be a leisure activitiy. I should prepare all meals in camping. After camping, I should repair all camping tools. It is a lot of losses compared to gainning.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]ny!

Typically, people leave developed areas to spend time outdoors, in pursuit of activities providing them enjoyment or in a form of educational experience. I guess, they find happiness and comfort with everything they do there. ^^

~ Trixia

Content:

Many people go camping for the leisure .

- Many people go camping for leisure.

There are so many camping shops and camping places in Korea.

- CORRECT.

Also, there are many TV shows about camping.

- CORRECT.

My younger brother also has gone camping regulraly.

- My younger brother has also gone camping regularly.

But I can\'t not understand how camping could be a leisure activitiy.

- But I can\'t understand how camping could be a leisure activity.

I should prepare all meals in camping.

- I should prepare all meals while camping.

After camping, I should repair all camping tools.

- After camping, I should repair all my camping tools.

It is a lot of losses compared to gainning.

- It is a lot of losses compared to gains.

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