What unusual or weird practices or cultures have you seen in Canada or Fiji? Share your answer in a
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In fiji, a school uniform called ‘Sulu’ is very
weird to me. It is a traditional garment for both men and women which is similar with a Kilt in Scotland. The bottom is composed of a long skirt that wraps one’s calves, and it makes its culture unique. It may be akward to those who have a first trial. I needed a few moments for adjusting to boys with a Sulu, when I entered a high school in Fiji.
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Hi there, Judy!
Some national costumes that we are not so familiar with can be awkward when we see them for the very first time or when we try them ourselves. But then, we have to understand that clothes are worn for protection as its primary function. So, we have to be matured to know the importance of this culture to a certain group of people.
Anyway, here on your homework composition, you have explained and discussed intensively about the details of the \'Sulu\'. It\'s very interesting and something that I haven\'t seen. I will check it quickly on the Internet.
Thank you for accomplishing this homework task.
See you later in class!
-T. Donna~
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Or: In Fiji, a school uniform called ‘Sulu’ is very weird to me.
It is a traditional garment for both men and women which is similar with a Kilt in Scotland.
>> Correct!
The bottom is composed of a long skirt that wraps one’s calves, and it makes its culture unique.
>> Correct!
It may be akward to those who have a first trial.
>> Correct!
Or: It may be awkward to those who will try it for the first time.
I needed a few moments for adjusting to boys with a Sulu, when I entered a high school in Fiji.
>> Correct!
Or: I needed a few moments to adjust to the boys with a Sulu when I entered high school in Fiji.
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