What usually hurt my feelings
학생이 쓴 원문
When I hear a hurtful word or a rude word to someone, I hurt my feelings.
I am so sad when I hear that words.
So I want to do something to feel better.
I usually sit on my chair and try to think about something else.
Because I don\'t want to think the words again.
And it is really help me feel better.
I want to recommend this method to other people.
Thank you.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Try to organize your thoughts more.
Give examples to make your point.
Give definitions if you have to.
Don\'t limit yourself and try new patterns.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
When I hear a hurtful word or a rude word to someone, I hurt my feelings.
>> When I hear hurtful words or rude comments about someone, my feelings get hurt.
I am so sad when I hear that words.
I am so sad when I hear that words.
>> I am so sad when I hear those words.
So I want to do something to feel better.
So I want to do something to feel better.
>> Correct
I usually sit on my chair and try to think about something else.
I usually sit on my chair and try to think about something else.
>> Correct
Because I don\'t want to think the words again.
Because I don\'t want to think the words again.
>> It\'s because I don\'t want to think about those words again.
And it is really help me feel better.
And it is really help me feel better.
>> It really helps me to feel better.
I want to recommend this method to other people.
I want to recommend this method to other people.
>> Correct
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