What usually makes you easily annoyed and why
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I usually get annoyed when I gain weight, or I feel that my body is heavy. I work out regularly to keep myself fit and make no limitation in a diet. I feel annoyed with myself neglect, and my endeavor is not practical. I pursue to be in good health, so getting fat makes me annoyed as my enemy.
강사 첨삭
I usually get annoyed when I gain weight, or I feel that my body is heavy.
>> I usually get annoyed whenever I gain weight, or I feel that my body is getting heavy.
I work out regularly to keep myself fit and make no limitation in a diet.
>> I work out regularly to keep myself fit and make no limitations on dieting.
I feel annoyed with myself neglect, and my endeavor is not practical.
>> I feel annoyed with myself neglecting, and my endeavor is not practical.
I pursue to be in good health, so getting fat makes me annoyed as my enemy.
>> CORRECT
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