What values did your parents pass on to you
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First of all, my parents are teacher. So They always say 'be honest'. Sometimes, If They are very conservative,I can't that I wanted. So I don't understand and hate them. haha. For example, my father bought me a long school skirt when I was highschool student. Because I wore a very short skirt(Because I reduced it >_<). Anyway, Nub of the matter is the day that my father bought me a skirt. Because
It is only only a three month ago I graduated. Ah....That situation was shocked.
But now I think that All of thouse made me a good adult. So I always appreciate to them♥.
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First of all, my parents are teacher.
>> First of all, my parents are teachers.
So They always say \'be honest\'.
>> So they always say, \'Be honest\'.
Sometimes, If They are very conservative,I can\'t that I wanted.
>> Sometimes, if they are very conservative,I can\'t do what I want.
So I don\'t understand and hate them. haha.
>> I don\'t understand so I hate them. haha.
For example, my father bought me a long school skirt when I was highschool student.
>> For example, my father bought me a long school skirt when I was a highschool student.
Because I wore a very short skirt(Because I reduced it >_<).
>> Correct!
Anyway, Nub of the matter is the day that my father bought me a skirt.
>> Do you mean: Anyway, the issue is the day when my father bought me a skirt.
Because It is only only a three month ago I graduated.
>> Because I graduated after three months.
Ah....That situation was shocked.
>> That situation was shocking.But now I think that All of thouse made me a good adult.
>> But now, I think that all of those made me a good adult.
So I always appreciate to them♥.
>> So I always appreciate them♥.
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