What values did your parents pass on to you

2015-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

학생이 쓴 원문

First of all, my parents are teacher. So They always say 'be honest'. Sometimes, If They are very conservative,I can't that I wanted. So I don't understand and hate them. haha. For example, my father bought me a long school skirt when I was highschool student. Because I wore a very short skirt(Because I reduced it >_<). Anyway, Nub of the matter is the day that my father bought me a skirt. Because It is only only a three month ago I graduated. Ah....That situation was shocked. But now I think that All of thouse made me a good adult. So I always appreciate to them♥.

강사 첨삭

[이름]! I am glad to read your composition. Thanks so much for sharing it. I was actually smiling when I was reading it. ^_^ As always, please go over the corrections so you can make a better one next time. ^_^ Have a great day! ~T. Jessie~ First of all, my parents are teacher. >> First of all, my parents are teachers. So They always say \'be honest\'. >> So they always say, \'Be honest\'. Sometimes, If They are very conservative,I can\'t that I wanted. >> Sometimes, if they are very conservative,I can\'t do what I want. So I don\'t understand and hate them. haha. >>  I don\'t understand so I hate them. haha. For example, my father bought me a long school skirt when I was highschool student. >> For example, my father bought me a long school skirt when I was a highschool student. Because I wore a very short skirt(Because I reduced it >_<). >> Correct! Anyway, Nub of the matter is the day that my father bought me a skirt. >> Do you mean: Anyway, the issue is the day when my father bought me a skirt. Because It is only only a three month ago I graduated. >> Because I graduated after three months. Ah....That situation was shocked. >> That situation was shocking.But now I think that All of thouse made me a good adult. >> But now, I think that all of those made me a good adult. So I always appreciate to them♥. >> So I always appreciate them♥.

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