What video game do you think is best and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, Minecraft is the best game I ever played.
I can do a lot of things in the game, and also it\'s interesting everyday.
Also it is keep updating so I can experience a lot of new sources in the game every year.
I can play some maps that are made by other players, and also I can play with other players.
Because of these reasons, I think that Minecraft is the best game that I ever played.
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In my opinion, Minecraft is the best game I ever played.
>> CORRECT
I can do a lot of things in the game, and also it\'s interesting everyday.
>> I can do a lot of things in that game, and it\'s very interesting to play everyday.
Also it is keep updating so I can experience a lot of new sources in the game every year.
>> It keeps on updating so I can experience a lot of new sources in the game every year.
I can play some maps that are made by other players, and also I can play with other players.
>> I can play on some maps that are made by other players, and play with other players too.
Because of these reasons, I think that Minecraft is the best game that I ever played.
>> CORRECT
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