What volunteer work do you see yourself doing?
학생이 쓴 원문
I volunteer at the local library to teach reading and discussion to children once a month.
I enjoy reading and teaching.
This volunteer activity is a very good for me.
I \'d like to continue this volunteer activity even though I will be retired.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you again for today\'s homework!
Have a nice day and talk to you later!
Teacher ELLY.
What volunteer work do you see yourself doing?
I volunteer at the local library to teach reading and discussion to children once a month.
>>I volunteer at the local library by helping the children read and discuss the books with them once a month.
I enjoy reading and teaching.
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or>>I have fun reading books and teaching people.
This volunteer activity is a very good for me.>>Doing volunteering is very good for me.
I \'d like to continue this volunteer activity even though I will be retired.
I \'d like to continue this volunteer activity even though I will be retired.
>>I \'d like to continue volunteering even when I retire.
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