What volunteer work do you see yourself doing?
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Actually, I hadn\'t worked on volunteer before. But, If I have enough money, hopefully, I should give donation to nursery school or orphanage. It\'s because I usually love children. and I felt When I was hungry at young age, It made me sad.
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I am sure you can share your big heart to children in need when the right time comes, [이름]!-Faith-
Actually, I hadn\'t worked on volunteer before. >> Actually, I haven\'t had a volunteer work before.
But, If I have enough money, hopefully, I should give donation to nursery school or orphanage.
>> But, if I have enough money, hopefully, I will give donation to nursery schools or orphanages.
It\'s because I usually love children. and I felt When I was hungry at young age, It made me sad.
>> It\'s because I usually love children and when I was young I felt sad when I was hungry.
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