What volunteer work do you see yourself doing? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I took a bus, there was a chair to seat.
But I didn\'t seat because there was a grandma who can\'t walk well.
Also, when I walk along the street, a stanger asked me a place.
I turned off my earphone and told her about a way to place.
I think that time, it wasn\'t a volunteer work.
But I think that again, it was a volunteer work.
I don\'t think it is a volunteer work. We are the same people in this world so we need to help each other.
강사 첨삭
Hello Nicole,
That was a good composition. Continue doing your best. See you on Thursday!
~ T. Demi ^^
That was a good composition. Continue doing your best. See you on Thursday!
~ T. Demi ^^
When I took a bus, there was a chair to seat.
>> When I took a bus, there was an empty seat.
But I didn\'t seat because there was a grandma who can\'t walk well.
>> But I didn\'t sit because there was a grandma who couldn\'t walk well.
Also, when I walk along the street, a stanger asked me a place.
>> Also, when I walked along the street, a stranger asked me for a direction.
I turned off my earphone and told her the right way.
>>I turned off my earphones and told her about a way to place.
I think that time, it wasn\'t a volunteer work. But I think that again, it was a volunteer work.
>> Initially, I thought it wasn\'t volunteer work, but reflecting on it, I can say it is.
I don\'t think it is a volunteer work. We are the same people in this world so we need to help each other.
>> I didn\'t think it was volunteer work. We are all the same in this world so we need to help each other.
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