What was life like before before cell phones?
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Theme: [ESSAY] What was life like before cell phones?
We can\'t talk with the people live far away with me.
And we can\'t heard newses from far away country.
We can\'t talk with friends that I can\'t meat.
We can\'t do anything when my familiy is sick and doctor lives far away.
I like the life that we have the cell phone and can talk with each other I can\'t see!
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Hi there, [이름]!
Welcome to the last day of the month! Thanks for sending your homework.
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] What was life like before cell phones?
We can\'t talk with the people live far away with me. And we can\'t heard newses from far away country.
>> We couldn\'t talk to people who live far away from us and couldn\'t hear any news from faraway countries.
We can\'t talk with friends that I can\'t meat.
>> We couldn\'t talk to our friends that we couldn\'t meet in person.
We can\'t do anything when my familiy is sick and doctor lives far away.
>> We couldn\'t do anything when our family members were sick and doctors live far away.
I like the life that we have the cell phone and can talk with each other I can\'t see!
>> I like our life now that we have cell phones and can talk to each other without meeting in person.
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