What was something that you couldn’t do at all when you were a kid but you can do really well now?
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Happy Monday again Sir [이름]. ^^
I appreciate that you shared your insights about this topic.
I think I will agree on that you mentioned below that: a child\'s personality is developed at the age of five.
The most critical stage for a child is from four- twelve years old.
It is the time wherein kids will develop trust, confidence and so on.
Thank you for your time today.
I hope that you will have a great time with your family.
Good night. Sweet dreams. ^^
Teacher Nina
Thinking hard about what I didn’t do well when I was a kid, but I can do really well now, I can’t think of anything.
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>> Better: I had a hard time thinking about what I didn’t do well when I was a kid, but I can do really well now, I can’t think of anything.
On the contrary, I was quite a good speaker on the stage in front of the people, but I am now a little bit nervous and suffer from lack of confidence.
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I feel that my competency has become deteriorated.
>> I feel that my competency deteriorated.
However, giving a second thought, I have not changed a lot.
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What I am now is what I was.
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It is true that what’s learned in the cradle is carried to the grave.
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I was pretty bad at drawing or painting, and I’m still not good at it.
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I was not a good runner, and I still am.
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Eight five percent of who you are – your intelligence, your personality, and your social skills – is developed by the age of five.
>> Eighty-five percent of who you are; your intelligence, your personality, and your social skills; is developed at the age of five.
A child’s early years lay the foundation for all that is to come.
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The human brain develops the vast majority of its neurons, and is at its most receptive to learning, between birth and five years of age.
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Early education plays a critical role in that sense.
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