What was the best drama series or movie that you have ever watched? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I like to watch TV drama with my wife on weekend. This genre is normally about love story. and sometimes I want drama writer to complete it with happy ending.
And we used to talk each other for the story of drama how it going and complain about actor\'s decision,action and etc..
It means that even though it was short discussion with wife I think it is greatly meaningful time for our life.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ethan!
Thank you for sending your answer to me.
All corrections I got here are minor ones like the missing articles- a and the.
So, I still want to say, good job! ^^
Since it\'s the weekend, I hope that you will enjoy another wonderful drama with your wife.
Enjoy the weekend and always take care.
~Teacher Gina
>> I like to watch TV dramas with my wife on weekends.
>> Or: I like to watch a TV drama with my wife on the weekend.
This genre is normally about love story.
>> CORRECT.
and sometimes I want drama writer to complete it with happy ending.
>> And sometimes, I want the drama writer to complete it with a happy ending.
And we used to talk each other for the story of drama how it going and complain about actor\'s decision,action and etc..
And we used to talk each other for the story of drama how it going and complain about actor\'s decision,action and etc..
>> And we used to talk to each other about the story of the drama like how it is going and complain about the actor\'s decision,action and etc..
It means that even though it was short discussion with wife I think it is greatly meaningful time for our life.
It means that even though it was short discussion with wife I think it is greatly meaningful time for our life.
>> It means that even though it was a short discussion with wife, I think it is greatly a meaningful time for our lives.
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