What was the best experience you\'ve had at your work? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I had success deal with new buyer (aka global group) last year.
This experience make occur pride of my work.
and then I\'m strive outstanding moment every day.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! Nice job!
See you tomorrow! :)
~Teacher Sheila
I had success deal with new buyer (aka global group) last year.
>>I had a success deal with a new buyer last year.
This experience make occur pride of my work.
>>This experience gave me pride at my work.
and then I\'m strive outstanding moment every day.
and then I\'m strive outstanding moment every day.
>>And then, I always strive for outstanding moment every day.
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